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March 9th, 2008

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Why a rubber soul? It’s just a pun, a term Paul McCartney came up with for the Beatles sixth album… it basically means ‘English Soul’… Seemed to sum it up for me.

Apart from some minor roles in school plays, I’ve only ever once acted on the stage… I played a corpse… rather unconvincingly.

But the concrete poetry

It’s quite fun to get into it. The idea that the arrangement and appearance of the words convey just as much as their meaning. It turns everything with type into art – hand-written sticky notes, product packaging and even bus tickets.

It was all about the necessity to convey meaning in a finite amount of space too. You don’t get a lot of room on a bus ticket, so you have to make it count.

And then recently I realised something else. The internet has made most people concrete poets. Line breaks, bold, italic and even underlines are all ways of adding expression to text – and I’ve seen a lot of inventive uses employed in adding comedy and emphasis.

The difference being though that concrete poetry loses one of its restraints in the virtual world. It is no longer confined by a limited space.

I’m not going to do it here, a piece of infinite concrete poetry, nor would I personally want to make it by hand, but there is a way to show you.

In fact, most people that know basic programming will already know it –

10 Print “the infinite generation of poetry”
20 Goto 10

I didn’t say it would be a good poem, just an infinite one. Plus, who would know if it wasn’t infinite, I doubt they’d have time to check.

And so, I’ve updated the comments section and given you a wysiwyg editor.

Play around, make something and then start telling all you friends and family that you are a poet.

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21 Comments

  1. tia Identicon Icon tia on 10.03.2008 at 02:06 (Reply)

    i’ve seen text placement used to great effect in graphic novels. i’m not sure whether that counts tho’

     

    1. Adam Identicon Icon Adam on 10.03.2008 at 08:50 (Reply)

      I think it probably does… There is a complex relationshop between wordart, comics and concrete poetry. The lines are not that distinct.

      Any novels in particular?

      1. tia Identicon Icon tia on 10.03.2008 at 14:43 (Reply)

        the best example i know is Hellsing, by Kohta Hirano. the plot isn’t anything special, but the pictures and words and timing are all put together stunningly
        ( the Vatican and French colonel mercenaries under the command of a secret British organization take on vampire Nazis) (yay)

        1. Adam Identicon Icon Adam on 10.03.2008 at 14:58 (Reply)

          I know the one… a similar style to the subtitles in the film ‘Nightwatch’ (and possibly the sequel ‘daywatch’…which I have yet to see)… vampires galore there too, sort of.

          1. tia Identicon Icon tia on 10.03.2008 at 23:07 (Reply) (Comments won't nest below this level)

            really? I’m surprised
            manga usually aren’t well-known outside of a few dedicated fans

  2. Ben Identicon Icon Ben on 10.03.2008 at 08:37 (Reply)

    Grrr, I wrote a really good comment, and the wireless network died in the a**e, and opera lost the text, which is unusual.
    *cries*
    In my comment, I heavily alluded that this was a forum, by calling it such.
    I mentioned Terry Pratchett, so you know it was a good comment.
    I discussed the ramifications of graffitti on word art and society.
    All that in a comment that was shorter then this one.
    Impressive, no?

    1. Adam Identicon Icon Adam on 10.03.2008 at 08:57 (Reply)

      I hope the new comment thing wasn’t responsible…

      ….that did sound like a good comment too…

      Is anyone else having problems?

      I discussed the ramifications of graffitti on word art and society – any chance of getting that again?

    2. tia Identicon Icon tia on 10.03.2008 at 14:44 (Reply)

      now i really want to see it

      1. Ben Identicon Icon Ben on 10.03.2008 at 19:25 (Reply)

        No, it is gone for ever.
        Gone, like the wind.
        It is water under the bridge.
        It is thoughts stolen by a summer breeze.
        It was not for here.

        I really doubt that it had anything to do with the really cool new mods (that I refuse to use :) ), likely just Opera being difficult.

  3. Roo Identicon Icon Roo on 10.03.2008 at 17:55 (Reply)

    Well, you know what this calls for?

    in Just- spring       when the world is mud- luscious the little lame balloonman whistles       far       and wee and eddieandbill come running from marbles and piracies and it’s spring when the world is puddle-wonderful the queer old balloonman whistles far       and       wee and bettyandisbel come dancing  from hop-scotch and jump-rope and it’s spring and      the              goat-footed balloonMan       whistles far and wee ~e.e. cummings

    1. Roo Identicon Icon Roo on 10.03.2008 at 17:55 (Reply)

      ack! Where’d all my line breaks go?

  4. Roo Identicon Icon Roo on 10.03.2008 at 17:59 (Reply)

    in Just-
    spring    when the world is mud-
    luscious the little
    lame balloonman

    whistles  far  and wee

    and eddieandbill come
    running from marbles and
    piracies and it’s
    spring

    when the world is puddle-wonderful

    the queer
    old balloonman whistles
    far   and   wee
    and bettyandisbel come dancing

    from hop-scotch and jump-rope and

    it’s
    spring
    and
      the

        goat-footed

    balloonMan  whistles
    far
    and
    wee

     e.e. cummings

    1. Roo Identicon Icon Roo on 10.03.2008 at 17:59 (Reply)

      Damn, I thought I knew what it was too. I give up.

      1. Adam Identicon Icon Adam on 10.03.2008 at 19:27 (Reply)

        Unfortunately, wordpress has decided to become sentient to the level that it expresses a distinct hatred of ‘loose’ formatting.

        We’re going to sit down and have a talk about it tonight and I’m going to put forward the case that liberal typesetting is an expressionistic art-form that will enable my readers to react on an aesthetic level… and wordpress will put forward the case that I can go and **** myself.

        1. Roo Identicon Icon Roo on 11.03.2008 at 13:04 (Reply)

          Ooooh! It looks right now!

    2. tia Identicon Icon tia on 10.03.2008 at 23:08 (Reply)

      when i was first taught about concrete poetry in school, i hated it.
      but now it’s starting to grow on me

    3. TonyB Identicon Icon TonyB on 11.03.2008 at 10:53 (Reply)

      I am the only person who can’t help but read that poem as if it was being spoken by William Shatner?

      1. Adam Identicon Icon Adam on 11.03.2008 at 11:01 (Reply)

        Ha, ha, now that you mention it…

        Perhaps all poetry should be read as if Shatner was reading it.

        *test runs Kipling’s ‘If’ inside own head*

        Well, it works.

        1. Roo Identicon Icon Roo on 11.03.2008 at 13:07 (Reply)

          Oh, but Patrick Stewart would be much prettier to listen to, wouldn’t he?

          1. Adam Identicon Icon Adam on 11.03.2008 at 13:11 (Reply) (Comments won't nest below this level)

            My favourite episode of ‘Extras’ features Patrick Stewart.

            I think you can see some of it here.

  5. Ben Identicon Icon Ben on 10.03.2008 at 19:33 (Reply)

    You know, in the right mind set, they are both good outcomes that could be fun.

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